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5 thoughts on “Hello world!

  1. I never doubt with your writing’s skill, Sist. You can describe the idea that you have in the sentences, and then make the great story with the great moral value too. I am really amazed with it. So does with this story. But, I think you need to pay attention with the plot in your story. I found an illogical thing in yours. You describe Mak Inah as a poor person. How can Riri continue her school? Did she ask to Mak Inah for her school fee? In the other side, Mak Inah couldn’t bring her own daughter to school because she hadn’t enough money. In my opinion, as the reader, you can add some explanations for this case. I believe you can make your story perfectly. Good job, Sist!
    By the way, I am really proud of you because you became the first winner in short story competition. Congraturation Sist! ¬¬

    • don’t say it please honey. our friends will forced me to treat them. ahahay, i’m so sorry not to tell this more. you are so criticized! then, i’ll explain it more. mak inah, as i said was a poor women. so, she couldn’t pay the Riri and Laksmi’s schools’ fee because she hadn’t enough money. But, riri could continue her study because she was clever and then got a scholarship after she had finished her study at elemntary school. so, she could study untill junior high school after her mother died when she at the sixth grade. in that story, she was 12 years old, means that she was in the second grade of junior high. get it? hope you understand. heeii, i have something to tell. but, i just tagged it at your wall at fb. ok? by the way, thanks for your compliment honey! :3 I really appreciate it.

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